Well done guys - this is very encouraging and for this stage suggests you can pull off a very impressive main task. You clearly show an understanding of all 3 editing techniques - I like the MOA on the door through a fade to black. The bag MOA also very good. Framing is good - you have some interesting enigmatic shots with the feet in close up, as well as good MCUs of David.
Things to consider. On Reverse shots, they don't have to be OTS. Your shots of Ethan are a tad too distant and the framing here perhaps is less good. You could have perhaps have had some variety in these and just had full face only shots of Ethan. Sound - note how by using SFX from the original recording, you get breaks in the sound and a loss of continuity. Foe the main task, you will need to consider an ambient soundtrack, and record sound separate. (although this was not a requirement for this task)
Also for next time, consider better use of lighting - you could have explored some interesting low key lighting shots with Ethan, where half his face is obscured - have a think about this for next time.
One other thing to consider next time, in SRS sequences, vary the shot distance - as the pressure built on Santiago (Dave), you could have gone closer to a BCU to show his doubt and worry.
Well done guys - this is very encouraging and for this stage suggests you can pull off a very impressive main task. You clearly show an understanding of all 3 editing techniques - I like the MOA on the door through a fade to black. The bag MOA also very good. Framing is good - you have some interesting enigmatic shots with the feet in close up, as well as good MCUs of David.
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On Reverse shots, they don't have to be OTS. Your shots of Ethan are a tad too distant and the framing here perhaps is less good. You could have perhaps have had some variety in these and just had full face only shots of Ethan.
Sound - note how by using SFX from the original recording, you get breaks in the sound and a loss of continuity. Foe the main task, you will need to consider an ambient soundtrack, and record sound separate. (although this was not a requirement for this task)
Well done. A very good PASS
Also for next time, consider better use of lighting - you could have explored some interesting low key lighting shots with Ethan, where half his face is obscured - have a think about this for next time.
ReplyDeleteOne other thing to consider next time, in SRS sequences, vary the shot distance - as the pressure built on Santiago (Dave), you could have gone closer to a BCU to show his doubt and worry.
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